in which brackie critiques your characters By Version

[Brackie]

hi this is me making an attempt to read/write every day by reading other people's characters and writing about them

- the premise of this particular critique thread is that you give me a version/game you were in and I read then critique all of the characters you wrote in that version.
- if you want in, post in here with the version you want critiqued/looked at (preferably with a list of your characters in said version)(or perhaps a link to a post/wikia page with said characters) and you'll be added to the pool
-- every character though. no "could you read A B and C but not touch X or Y?" - all or nothing, baybee.
- i will try to go in depth but i am generally a man of brevity so if you've seen my Read-A-Thon posts you'll know what you're in for w/r/t critique length (unless something catches my eye in a positive or negative manner). i'll do my best to talk about things that worked or things that didn't, either overall or in specific posts/threads/arcs/scenes, but there's some rust on the hinges so bear with me as i learn how to do critiques again
- only request critiques for characters from versions currently still running if all your characters in said version are decease-ed (at this moment that means if you're out of v7 or program v3 or you kill all your tv3 cast in pregame right this minute)
- any version, any length, any size. so if you were in the battle royale au, or virtua, or v2, then here's where I get to experience that version through your characters for a moment.

i'll start the queue w/ three handlers and see what happens

* Catche Jagger (V7)
* Kermit (V7)
* Ruggahissy (V5)

[Catche Jagger]

I'd appreciate a critique of my v7 cast: Thomas Buckley, Colin McCabe, and Sapphire Waters

[Kermit]

im kermit and i was in v7 and one of my children is like 15k words and the other is [toben's wordcount spoilers] even though they're 15 kids apart in the death order

[Ruggahissy]

V5

Pls read Michelle Wexler, Paris Ardennes and Amaranta Montalvo.

[Brackie]

and that is a closed queue