Ohm attempts critique
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2020 12:24 am
Hi! So, for a while I've been pondering whether or not to do one of these, and I finally decided to give it a try. I have done critiques of sorts through read-a-thons, but this will be first attempt at an actual thread and hopefully I don't screw up too bad.
As for how I'm going to do this, I'll be reading the characters sent in from start to finish a number of times. This way I can catch setups, foreshadowing and make my attempt at painting a full picture of their story. I might pm to ask about specific things if people are up for that, or talk about where I am in the character story in chat so if you don't want either of those, then please tell me.
Some ground rules.
1. Character is complete.
2. Character is from a mini.
3. Queue limited to 5.
4. I'm going to take my time with these.
With that said, have at it.
Queue:
1: Maxwell Lombardi (SC2)
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3:
4:
5:
As for how I'm going to do this, I'll be reading the characters sent in from start to finish a number of times. This way I can catch setups, foreshadowing and make my attempt at painting a full picture of their story. I might pm to ask about specific things if people are up for that, or talk about where I am in the character story in chat so if you don't want either of those, then please tell me.
Some ground rules.
1. Character is complete.
2. Character is from a mini.
3. Queue limited to 5.
4. I'm going to take my time with these.
With that said, have at it.
Queue:
1: Maxwell Lombardi (SC2)
2:
3:
4:
5:
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