Jacob Rowe

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Jacob Rowe

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Name: Jacob Rowe
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Grade: 11
Hobbies and Interests: Yoga, Guided Meditation, YouTube

Gift: Mood Ring
Power Details: Jacob’s skin and iris colours change involuntarily depending on the emotions he is experiencing, e.g. RAL 3026 (Red) when angry, RAL 5011 (Dark Blue) when sad, RAL 7034 (Beige-Grey) when bored,
or RAL 9016 (White) when scared. A full list has yet to be compiled, but it seems that the colours expressed are tied to traditional western cultural colour associations. The change between colours happens slowly, with it developing spotchily in seemingly random locations, before fully transitioning to the new prominent colour in around 5-10 minutes. The intensity of the colouration varies depending on the intensity of the emotion, ranging from looking like a faded tattoo at its least intense, to looking like vivid bodypaint at its most intense.
Limitations and Drawbacks: Mood Ring makes it impossible for Jacob to hide his emotional state, with everything from disappointment to sexual excitement being communicated openly by his Gift. In addition to this, the stark colourations make it difficult for Jacob to be visually unnoticable to others.

Appearance: Jacob is extremely tall, standing at 6’3”, but weighs just 137 pounds. This gives him a tall, gangly look, accentuated by having an extremely large wingspan that leaves his hands resting lower on his thighs than the average person. This makes him easy to spot, even amongst those with similar visually obvious gifts. He is of Caucasian descent, although his facial features are relatively muted, with a shallow chin and an elongated midface. His hair is jet black, and cut into a shaggy bob that stops at around chin length, and whilst he has begun to be able to grow some facial hair, he keeps himself clean shaven. His skin and iris colour are normally controlled by his Gift, however when sleeping he exhibits a default state which is visually similar to albinism, with ashen blonde hair, extremely pale white skin, and colourless irises which appear pink in direct light. His wardrobe is relatively informal and bland, preferring simple block colours and cuts of clothing. On the day of his abduction he was wearing wearing a white t-shirt with no logo, and a charcoal grey zip up hoodie, as well as stonewashed blue jeans and black sneakers.

Background:
  • Jacob was born in Bend, Oregon as the first child of 3 between the still unmarried, but happily cohabitating couple of Terrance Rowe and River Kershaw.
  • His siblings are a pair of sisters, Kaara [13] and Valerie [9].
  • Terrance and River co-own Terry & River's Cider, a craft hard cider brewing company which has achieved moderate local success. Whilst their exact living standards have fluctuated, they have have kept at around a middle class living for most of Jacob's life.
  • Jacob’s gift was visible early on in his life, with it communicating his emotions even before he began speaking. This lead to him requiring tutoring from a speech therapist when he was a toddler, as he did not follow the same developmental pathway as most children do of communicating their needs to parents, which left him nonverbal until the age of 3. This also stunted his social development when he entered the schooling system, struggling to keep up with his more verbally developed peers, and standing apart from them due to his appearance. Whilst he was never directly bullied, he felt excluded, and would often choose to spend his time with others whose Gift had left them unable to communicate normally during play.
  • Jacob retains a close connection to his family, despite his early communication issues. He is both grateful for their help in overcoming it, and also feels comfortable in using his Gift as part of his body language rather than something he has to hide around them.
  • During puberty, Jacob quickly realised that he was attracted to other men as well as women. Whilst it was not immediately apparent, the subject of his first gay crush was able to discern what the colour of his Gift meant, and publicly rejected him before it was even possible for Jacob to express himself voluntarily. This experience was emotionally devastating for Jacob, and he has struggled with romantic relationships as a result, having never dated through his time in high school.
  • As Jacob grew older, he began to work towards controlling his Gift via controlling his emotional state through various different means, and experimenting with religion, marijuana, and a host of other remedies. Eventually he would find success in yoga, and the meditation that forms an important part of the process during his mid-teens. This would lead into it becoming a key part of his daily routine, and something he finds deeply enjoyable.
  • Jacob has recently begun producing his own content on YouTube where he provides narration for people to take part in their own guided meditations. He has had very little success in attracting a large audience from this, but enjoys it, and uses interacting with his small number of subscribers online as a social outlet.
  • Jacob is still relatively introverted, attending few social events outside of school and preferring to arrange things amongst close friends when he does.
  • Jacob’s academic record is sub-par to average, with him struggling to engage with classroom learning and his parents not encouraging his studies beyond simple platitudes.
  • Jacob has no solid plans after graduating high school, but he has begun having conversations with his parents about becoming involved with their cider making.
Personality: Jacob is a naturally empathetic person, who tries to see the best in others and help them to realise it, and goes to great lengths to try and keep others happy. However he is equally private and cautious around others, finding it hard to truly be honest with them, often explaining away his emotions with excuses or misattribution in order to not upset them. As a result, he is deeply unassertive, and is easily taken advantage of by others who provide him easy ways out of social situations he isn't comfortable with.

Other Skills: Physical fitness
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Hey, Frozen. Jacob's got a pretty good base going on but he is currently DENIED pending some expansions and some editing/grammar stuff (changes in red text where that kinda thing applies). This post's gonna have some direct quotes so it looks a little more daunting than it really is but regardless let's get right into it.

[+] Powers
Jacob’s skin and irises change colour involuntarily
[...]RAL 7034 (Beige-Grey) when bored, or RAL 9016 (White) when scared.
- Honestly I'm not familiar with the RAL system but it seems to be appropriate here from when I Googled so it can stay if you'd like it to, but also I'm kinda dumb so I just want to make sure/clarify intent due to its use in the context of paints and varnish color matching and industry of that sort. Does that imply Jacob's skin has a noticeable sheen/gloss to it upon changing color or does it remain the same as normal skin?

- Does the intensity of his skin colors also change with how strong he's feeling a particular emotion, or perhaps does the splotching occur faster or slower?

- In his neutral state does he have a particular color as well or does he remain in his natural skin tone?
Mood Ring’s main drawback is it making it impossible for Jacob to hide his emotional state, with everything from disappointment to sexual excitement being communicated openly by his Gift. In addition to this, the stark colourations make it difficult to remain unnoticed.
I get what you're trying to say here but this reads kind of awkward so I would encourage you to reword it for clarity like so:
"Mood Ring makes it impossible for Jacob to hide his emotional state, with everything from disappointment to sexual excitement being communicated openly by his Gift. In addition to this, the stark colourations make it difficult for Jacob to be visually unnoticable to others."
[+] Appearance
- I would get rid of Jacob's exact wingspan measurement since it's not really needed and also uses icky gross metric units that scare me anyway.
When combined with his Gift leaving his skin shifting somewhere between a serene sky blue and a content desaturated yellow, he would be hard to lose in a crowd.
- This sentence is too purple (this will be my only use of color wordplay) so I'd remove it entirely and maybe just dryly reword it to how his body proportions and his skin tones make him stand out even from those also with visually obvious Gifts.

- What's Jacob's natural eye color?

- I assume that last bit is the outfit he wore during the abduction but could you reword/clarify it so?
[+] Background
- What are the names and ages of Jacob's siblings?

- What do his parents work as, or at least their socioeconomic status?

- Does he get along with his parents and siblings, considering how socially stunted he was in his early years?
As Jacob grew older, he began to work towards controlling his Gift via controlling his emotional state and experimented with religion, marijuana, and a host of other remedies.
Eventually he would find both success, and a deep love in yoga, and the meditation that forms an important part of the process.
This sentence also reads a little awkward to me so I would suggest changing it a little like so for clarity:
"He eventually developed a deep love for yoga as he found success with the meditation and self-reflection elements that are important parts of it."
He has had very little success in this, but enjoys it, and he interacts with requests from his audience immensely.
- What's his current reputation around school like? Has he ever gotten into trouble due to the consequences of his Gift?

- Any goals/plans for after he graduates high school?
[+] Personality
Whilst he often comes across as slightly awkward, communicating how he feels about things bluntly and rarely participating in the white lies, he is complimentary and polite in the extreme in an attempt to offset that.
This bit is also kind of confusing and meanders so I'd revise it like maybe this:
Whilst he often comes across as slightly awkward as a consequence of his Gift and inability to hide his true emotions from others, he tries his best to compensate by being a kind and friendly person.
- Does Jacob know he's been/being taken advantage of or does he desire to do anything about it?
Lemme know when you hit all of these things or PM me if you have any questions/comments/concerns with my questions/comments/concerns and I'll take another look when you're ready!
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Fuck it, Discord down, time to edit profiles.

And don't worry about the length of the response - Appreciate the depth and direct suggestions. I banged this thing out in an hour, so expected to make a lot of revisions.
Jacob’s skin and iris colours change involuntarily
- Slightly more tractable rewrite.

I used RAL coding because it's slightly more wieldy a way to reference colours in text than Hex/RGB though not by much. Generally was just trying to give the mental image of someone holding up swatches to someone's skin as that's scientific and creepy to me. No sheen was intended, so I will clarify - Along w/ the details regarding how intensity of the colouration is governed;
The intensity of the colouration varies depending on the intensity of the emotion, ranging from looking like a faded tattoo at it's least intense, to looking like vivid bodypaint at it's most intense.
Thanks for the rewrite on Limitations & Drawbacks.
His skin and iris colour is normally controlled by his Gift, however when sleeping he exhibits a default state which is visually similar to albinism, with ashen blonde hair, extremely pale white skin, and colourless irises which appear pink in direct light.
His wardrobe is relatively informal and bland, preferring simple block colours and cuts of clothing. On the day of his abduction he was wearing wearing a white t-shirt with no logo, and a charcoal grey zip up hoodie, as well as stonewashed blue jeans and black sneakers
Terrance and River co-own Terry & River's Cider, a craft hard cider brewing company which has achieved moderate local success. Whilst their exact living standards have fluctuated, they have have kept at around a middle class living for most of Jacob's life.
- I have no regrets.
Jacob retains a close connection to his family, despite his early communication issues. He is both grateful for their help in overcoming it, and also feels comfortable in using his Gift as part of his body language rather than something he has to control around them.
- Good point on the family relationship stuff. Helps contrast later point as well.
Eventually he would find success in yoga, and the meditation that forms an important part of the process during his mid-teens. This would lead into it becoming a key part of his daily routine, and something he finds deeply enjoyable.
- This needed to be two sentences yeah.
He has had very little success in attracting a large audience from this, but enjoys it, and uses interacting with his small number of subscribers online as a social outlet.
- Hopefully this doesn't sound as garbled.
During puberty, Jacob quickly realised that he was attracted to other men as well as women. Whilst it was not immediately apparent, the subject of his first gay crush was able to discern what the colour of his Gift meant, and rejected publicly him before it was even possible for him to express himself voluntarily. This experience was emotionally devastating for Jacob, and he has struggled with romantic relationships as a result, having never dated through his time in school.
- Sorry @ anyone who feels personally attacked
Jacob is still relatively introverted, attending few social events outside of school and preferring to arrange things amongst close friends when he does.
Jacob has no solid plans after graduating high school, but he has begun having conversations with his parents about becoming involved with their cider making.
I just rewrote the whole personality section because I have a bit of a different feel for the guy now. He is a doormat people pleaser who is desperately afraid of the fact people will realise he is an emotional wreck and not actually as happy as he tries to convince everyone he is.
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Post by Jilly »

Great job, Jacob looks great and also makes me want to give him a hug. We've got a few apostrophe slips and a word placement switcheroo/noun-pronoun clarification I think needs to be there and then Jacob should be good to go.

Powers
The intensity of the colouration varies depending on the intensity of the emotion, ranging from looking like a faded tattoo at its least intense, to looking like vivid bodypaint at its most intense.

Background
Whilst he was never directly bullied, he felt excluded, and would often choose to spend his time with others whose Gift had left them unable to communicate normally during play.
[...]and publicly rejected him before it was even possible for Jacob to express himself voluntarily.
...And that should be it! Lemme know when you've got it changed.
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Thanks, embodied.
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APPROVED and welcome to SOTF Supers as soon as I figure out how to move threads on mobile.
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