No doubt, it was fear that got her moving 'til she hit the waves. Fear that didn't fit words so good. In her head it was all replays of the way Vee'd been moving out of sorts all night. A hot mess stumbling worse than she did on her way to a concussion check and an ocean? She saw how that went bad. ...

The first time she'd cracked big numbers with No Parking Zone she couldn't wait to show Dario. Like it was yesterday: skipping through the house with her phone over her head and a grin that could split concrete right until she got to his home office. Seeing the door got her frozen. On the other side...

Rupert decided Dale was a pretty cool dude. Here he was some local celebrity with a reputation to protect surrounded by Common People and he got hit with some facts he was unfamiliar with, what was he gonna do? The classic move would have been to back Rupert up, nobody would have known the differenc...

Oh hey wow there were eight billion people here all the sudden? Which was kinda disappointing because he and Mary were about ten montage shots away from being college pen pals who get estranged when one of them has to go to The War and goes missing in action and it's super sad but then they show up ...

Genuine fuckin' problems. You could slap it on cards and they'd need no further introduction. Like Vee would ever get caught working a job that would use 'em though, maybe keep it to tees, caps, all that. Merch was always hot. She didn't know what she was thinking. More than the booze or the weed th...

Howdy VoltTurtle! Seo-yun is in a pretty good place to start with but is DENIED pending some details I need added. Seo-yun needs a Casting Day look; if it's her usual casual outfit it'd be fine repeating that with whatever make-up she was wearing that day. Did Seo-yun test into Mangrove and obtain s...

Angel knew there was a chance, a probably pretty good chance, that when she swung in to give Vee an arm it'd get shoved away. Leaning on anybody required the strength to be weak, y'know? God save her she was still kinda high but it was the vibe, to be able to grab on and let somebody lead you you ha...

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We're real close on this one but I'll have to leave him DENIED until the "resolve to do most things" line is hammered out into something more concrete. I like where you've gone with the expansion but it leaves me with questions; given that these advantages are being written with SotF in mi...

Hey Admiral Mage, Joshua is looking pretty close to ready but is DENIED with one last thing I'd like to see addressed. Joshua's second advantage is that he has "a fair amount of resolve to do most things." This is too vague and contradicts the biography, since his biggest struggle tends to...

Sip. Hmm. Sip sip. Hmmmm. Sip sip sip. Hmmmmmmmmm. Sluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrp. Nope, he couldn't get around it. This would definitely taste better with light purple, and he liked to take peeps at their word but he wasn't so sure that barista took his worries about the gluten in the boba seriously. He...

Howdy Admiral Mage, welcome to Mini and TV3! I'm Paige and I'll be critiquing Joshua. He's off to a good start but DENIED this pass with some issues I'd like to look at. "Watching places" is kind of a vague interest and from the profile seems to be tied to his interest into the supernatura...

He went to knock and something about the resonance on Mary's door kinda took him, like he still had tasty bass line throbbing in his soul and this felt like the right place to get out. So he tapped a couple more times in rhythm, and a couple more, he had the whole thing going in his head so he let h...

Coiled was the word she liked to use for it. Not like a snake, more like springs, or were they the same thing? They kinda looked the same but she didn't know shit about snakes. Not important. Springs, that's how she pictured it, a bunch of springs wound tight all through her body. That tension could...