I nominate Amanda the Adventurer.

Looking much better, I just have a few extra points for us to tidy up and we should be good to go: So I'd still ike to see a couple more face details. Give me some shapes of eyes or ears or mouth and the like. Something I missed in the first draft is we don't really cover why Jeremy opted for piano ...

Welcome I'm a critiquer blah blah He has rather little muscle to speak of, at least visibly, though vaccuming and going on walks have given him better shoulder and leg strength than the average person. I know vacuuming is tiring, but I'm not sure it's enough by itself to give him above average shoul...

Hello Toben we haven't met before but I am a critiquer here so let's do that.

APPROVED

Well that was easy.

Sorry the cutoff for this was December 30th.

Chevy’s dismissal stung like a knife in his side. Acquaintances , not friends. And this was after Lucas had tried to shower Chevy with his generosity as well. What a dick. Not helping were the thinly concealed complaints from behind the counter. Lucas appreciated that the words had been carefully cu...

so did the case go cold or

Lucas leaned against the counter as Faith spoke, turning his back to Johnny. Always make eye contact with the people you are talking to, not the service staff. “Ah, well- I don’t think you could put a formal time on it.” He smirked in response to Faith's question, just a little too hard. “I just thi...

Lilith wrote: ↑Fri Dec 01, 2023 4:18 am

This might explain what I found on her body.... this was on her 'profile'.........

Is this where she is now or where she died?

Did you know? Foxes don't know how to use maps.

This whole thread.

Did you know? Foxes do not intentionally meme.

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1179220312550801458/1179284595108216882/OIG.npX3oRBSK6tHK6K.jpg?ex=6579395d&is=6566c45d&hm=e023fc818df113938cdbc6760ed59181c305d561db69240d12d5e838205e1348& ... How do you impale someone using your finger? Your biology skills suck so badly you stat...

Is it possible Kami did it by impaling Claire on her finger?

Did you know? Foxes do not have fingers.

I think the crime under investigation here is murder, not biological contamination! If Claire died by biohazard there wouldn't be all the hot pink blood. Something mister ultimate hazmat can confirm.

Did you know? Foxes sometimes eat bugs!

Fun fox fact: they aren't as quick to tear someone's throat out for no reason as you guys are!